Jellyfishking3's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Mr. George Smiles]

I can tell you enjoyed doing this artwork. You clearly have your own approach to shaping and stylizing anatomy, which is good. On the whole I would say it is quite rudimentary though. Not bad, but it doesn't stand out much. With tweaks and revision it does hold promise. I would say the cane is actually the best part of this art, it is well stylized for sure.

TurtleManHQ responds:

Thank you very much for the genuine criticism lol

[A remake for a Old draw]

I glanced at your previous iteration and this does show improvement. While simplicity is not necessarily a bad thing, this however is clearly lacking in an amount of detail that I think would serve it better. Too much blank space, too much "paint bucket" tool vibes. But I can tell some understanding of basics is forming, the shadows and little stitches are on the right track.

Not to be too harsh, as you may be younger and you also make it clear that you don't post especially seriously, but since you were aiming to copy your reference image, trying to convey more of the burlap fabric feel on the body would be a good area to improve. I'm sure it isn't easy on Adobe Animate or whatever you use, but for one-and-done art I think you should always add as much as you can. I would say this is one of the better doodles you've posted.

maric-on777 responds:

I'm going to take into account what you told me, and yes, I use adobe animate

[Pursuers in DB4J Redesign Concepts]

Love the aesthetic to it all, you've definitely got it figured out, down to the stylized names - good stuff! The gritty linework owes itself to their presence as well. I even love the mid-flailing poses on the first two. Overall they just ooze chaos like no tomorrow.

Not to impose on your vision, but perhaps the first two characters feet would look better as hooves of some sort, as the forked design reminds me of the Mirelurks from FO3 haha, although it's only a suggestion. Bolder outlines would really accentuate the jagged edges as well I feel like and work in the style's favor as well I believe. Best of luck on getting scouted, I left a recommendation for you! Keep it up (:

ZaGrizza responds:

thank you
im trying to draw more but been busy and practicing digital

[Knight Sketchy]

Very good! I really love the style and the shadowing is on point!

UncleBladey responds:

Thank you!

[Halfway to Pico Day]

I love how you included characters from The Behemoth and Team Meat (my two favorite gaming companies of all time). This rocks and I'm glad I can see it as a Newgrounds background now! Congrats on your win by the way!

P.S: I know I'm a dingus for asking but how come neither Isaac or Hatty Hattington are crying?

MateusAbrantes responds:

Thank you for the kind words, mate!

About your question, since I haven't played their respective games yet (I know, I'm sorry), I wasn't sure if the crying was a permanent thing about their personalities. Even so, I tried to give this piece a happy mood - as you can see, I put Hank next to Weebl & Bob (eggs!), surrounded by grenades, so... happiness. lol

[No One Can Hear You Stink]

five outta five, and oh shoosh yeah I'm excited!

Buckycarbon responds:

Thanks :D I love everything about what they've been saying so far!

[Five Nights]

Haven't played the game much yet. Anyways, this is probably my favorite one from your "first wave" of drawings so far!

PlagueDocterNick responds:

Thanks meng, this is one of my personal favorites. I love how I interpreted these characters!

[Mr Bottle cap Stapler]

Crazy awesome outta-control nonsense!

JJCripps1996 responds:

Thank you!!

[Cyber Alien]

Very good! Especially for 8-bit graphics. I love the techno parts of it especially. What's also impressive is that you managed to make the background work for it.

enzob7 responds:

Thanks for your feedback. It's much appreciated.

[Dubby Snub]

If you sniffed him it would tickle. Amazing, by the way!

TaraGraphika responds:

Haha, But I would get high. Thank you!